Selasa, 29 April 2014

NARRATIV TEXT : SOMETHING I HAD I WISH



Something I had I wish
Talking  about something I had I wish, actually so many something I wish. Such as new motorcycle, new mobile phone, new dress, new bag, new shoes, new books, new watch, etc. but now talk about  the necessary, I really need a new laptop. Because my laptop already broke, so that’s why I really need new laptop for support my assignment. Because in my campus all of my friends have a laptop, and all of the subject is needed the laptop for to do the assignment, such as statistics, researches methodology and for to do working paper.
But my mother said to me “later if mother have a enough money, absolutely I will buy for you”. When I heard my mother’s says I think that’s right, because laptop is one of the expensive thing. So many the necessary that should be completely. I am sad, when I heard my mother’s reason. Actually my mother has something that she hide from me and I can’t guess it. Wether I know my mother don’t have enough money to buy that what I want  I will try to help her and don’t to force her. Because that’s very difficult to relize.
May be she can buy it when she has enough money and when I can’t get a something easly that’s very make me sad but I trust something who if we want to has it actually we can relize in a day,and we don’t know when our fortune will come. And we are should be a obey one so that can help us to face all of our problems  and as we know if we patient with our problems, God will paithful to help us. Trust  to God is better in the to face all of our problems.

Kamis, 24 April 2014

DENPASAR MOON



Denpasar moon, shining on an empty street
I returned to the place we used to meet
Denpasar moon, shine your light and let me see
That my love is still waiting there for me

I saw you standing there
Through the rain I saw you turn and smile
Were you waving to me
Through the rain I ran across the street.

But you were gone, there was no one
You had vanished with my dreams.

Denpasar moon, shining on an empty street
I returned to the place we used to meet
Denpasar moon, shine you light and let me see
That my love is still waiting there for me

But you were gone, there was no one
You were gone, flying homeward
You were gone, there was no one
You had vanished with my dreams

Denpasar moon, shining on an empty street
I returned to the place we used to meet
Denpasar moon, shine your light and let me see
That my love is still waiting there for me
That my love is still waiting there for me

Denpasar moon…


Senin, 21 April 2014

WRITTING 3



The description of narrative text

What is narrative?

Narrative text is text which tells about something, and usually the story is fiction. The purpose of narrative text is for entertain the reader and get a sympathy and empathy.
In the narrative, we can know about the story, characteristic of the player of the story.

Why write narrative?

Narrative text is very important in our life, because we can know about the story which happen in the past, we can know about the characteristic, and the information about the

 How to differ from other writing genres?

First, the main purpose of this genre is to entertain through storytelling and to engage the reader in an imaginative experience.  Typical examples of narratives that children will encounter take the form of fairy tales, myths and legends.
Second, see the characteristics:
• The form of a story about an event or experience of the author.
• Incident or event that is delivered in the form of events that actually occurred can be sheer imagination or a combination of both.
• Based conflict, because without conflict usually uninteresting narrative.
• It has aesthetic value.
• Emphasize the chronological arrangement.
The steps How to make paragraph writing?
Determine the first theme and the message to be delivered

  Example: The Legend of Rawa Pening

• Set the target reader
• Design of the main events are shown in schematic form the groove.

    Example: Once upon a time, there was a little poor boy came into a little village. He was very hungry and weak. He knocked at every door and asked for some food, but nobody cared about him. Nobody wanted to help the little boy.
• For the main event in the beginning, progress, and end of story.
Example:
Once upon a time, there was a little poor boy came into a little village. He was very hungry and weak. He knocked at every door and asked for some food, but nobody cared about him. Nobody wanted to help the little boy.

beginning
Finally, a generous woman helped him. She gave him shelter and a meal. When the boy wanted to leave, this old woman gave him a “lesung”, a big wooden mortar for pounding rice. She reminded him, “please remember, if there is a flood you must save yourself. Use this “lesung” as a boat”. The “lesung” was happy and thanked the old woman.The little boy continued his journey. While he was passing through the village, he saw many people gathering on the field. The boy came closer and saw a stick stuck in the ground. People challenged each other to pull out that stick. Everybody tried, but nobody succeeded. “Can I try?” asked the little boy. The crowd laughed mockingly. The boy wanted to try his luck so he stepped forward and pulled out the stick. He could do it very easily. Everybody was dumbfounded.
Suddenly, from the hole left by stick, water spouted out. It did not stop until it flooded the village. And no one was saved from the water except the little boy and the generous old woman who gave him shelter and meal. As she told him, he used the “lesung” as a boat and picked up the old woman
progress
The whole village became a huge lake. It is now known as Rawa Pening Lake in Salatiga, Central Java, Indonesia.
End of story
• Details of major events in the event details as supporters story
• Develop character and characterization, setting, and point of view
character
The boy,that a poorv boy but not arrogant and kind old woman
Setting
Place : village, field,
Time : a day
Point of view
The first people

Example of narrative text
Ali Baba

Once upon a time there were 40 cruel thieves who put their stolen money and treasures in a cave. They went in the cave by saying”Open Sesame” to the cave entrance. A poor person, named Ali Baba saw them while they were doing that, so he heard the opening word. After they left, he went toward the cave and opened it. Suddenly he found a very large quantity of money and golden treasures. He took some of it and went back home. After that he became a rich man and his brother wanted to know how he became rich.


Ali Baba turned into the richest man in his village. His evil brother was really jealous of him, and wanted to know how he could get such a lot of money. Therefore, when Ali Baba went to the cave again to take some more money, his brother followed him. He saw everything, and decided to go back the next day to take some money for himself. The next morning he found a lot of money in the cave, and he wanted to take all of them. Unfortunately, when he was busy carrying the money to his house, the thieves came. The boss of the thieves asked him how he knew about the cave. He told everything, but unluckily they killed him and went to Ali
Baba’shouse.


After finding Ali Baba’s house, they made a plan to kill him the following night. Some of the thieves hid in big jars, and the boss pretended that he was a merchant who wanted to sell the jars to Ali Baba. Ali Baba who was a kind man invited the boss of the thief to have lunch together.

After lunch they took a rest. Luckily, the house maid went out of the house, and found that there were thieves inside the jars. She finally boiled hot oil and poured it into the jars to kill all of them. The boss of the thieves was caught, and put into prison.
Ali Baba was saved from the danger, and he finally lived happily ever after with his maid who became his wife shortly after.

Why my sentence is called as the topic sentence? 

It called the topic sentence because the sentence is in the beginning of paragraphs and sentences are used as developer.